MycosynthWellspring's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[in a flash of death]

Good idea. I haven't thought of this combo.
Pretty simple, but effective. Bends the rules a little bit, but I like it.

I think it could've been an interresting piece if you'd done it thoroughly - like with the background and everything.

Cheers m8.

[Mix N Match - The Firewielder]

Not bad at all.

The only trouble I have with this piece is that shape in the foreground.

It's a very simple silouhuette and there is nothing else in the same plane as it - no environmental objects or other characters. So it's just a black blob that stops me from seeing the professor for no apperent reason.
Looks kind of annoying and I don't get why it's there.

Otherwise - good job.

[Jetpacker]

Looks pretty crisp.
Something seems to be lacking though.
I think the piece would've benefited a lot if you amplifed the contrast between lights and darks of shadows and highlights.

It's sort of uniform brightness as of now and is percieved kind of flat.

I have a feeling we are going to see a lot more Jetpacks and Flamethrowers down the line :p

thisislaz responds:

Hey, thanks for your comment! Yeah I see what you mean, originally it was my intention to not push the lights and darks too much, to get this cartoony feel, but you might be right, might have overdone it. Think Im gonna go and try adding some extra layers to it now, to see if it would benefit from it :)

[Alien Wizard Chase]

Sry, but Don't steal backgrounds pls. GEEZ! It just looks silly when you take the hyperrendered image of a nebula off google and paste your drawing over it.

Space isnt even that hard to draw! A few gas clouds with soft brushes and a bunch of twinkles with blur not to clash with your drawing style.
Job done ezpz.

[A Battle of Epic Proportions]

Strong lines! Much clarity! Such intensity!
Not a fan of the minimalism in the scenery though.
Cheers.

cryptc responds:

Thanks for your honest opinion! Your criticism is very appreciated.

[A cute battle can be as exciting as an epic one]

I'd say from among all of the "imaginary sequence"-themed entries this is definitely the best executed one.
Well done and GL m8.

[Round 2, Fight!]

Thought this was digital at first. Pretty solidly done piece.
Something rubs me the wrong way about how you've done their necks (especially the black one - it's like there's no distinction between it's cranium and the spine) but otherwise very admirable work!

Dam, the closer to deadline - the more solid works are starting to crop up in the entries! Haven't finished mine yet, but good luck to you m8.

Kaital responds:

I see what you mean regarding the neck/back thing... tbh it's not my greatest work, and I have to admit I've never drawn a dragon from that angle, which made things a bit more difficult :)

Thanks for the feedback though :)

And good luck to you as well :)

[The Dovahkitten]

ZoMG Dovahkitten! (that 's the way you spell it btw)
The best idea ever! xD
How did that never even crossed my mind I have no idea!
SO GUD!
Put that nord helmet onto anything = instant win in my book.
This is gonna make the cut for sure.
Cheers m8 and GL!

Jelphy responds:

Thank you so much, I myself am not so confident, but we will see how it turns out :)

[Standoff]

I just can't unsee the fact that there is no space for the dragon's front legs and it looks just like a big reptilian head with two wings stuck to the back of the cranium. xD
Could be some sort of Chiropteric dragon though, sure why not, or might just be me getting loopy.
Despite that: the Detalization of the objects in focus is exceptional - well worth being featured.
Cheers m8 an GL.

LukeF responds:

It was actually supposed to be Hunching down towards the kitten and be Bipedal having no Front legs, Like the wings are the arms in a way. But I can see where your coming from :P
& Thank you so much

[The Ultimate Challenge]

Daym! the Idea with a clockwork explodo-kitten was way cooler man!
This just looks kind of bland in comparison, no offence.
Did you chicken out to go with that idea or what was the deal there?
Good execution though.
The eye is somehow not reptilian enough for me, but hey, what do I know, rite?
Nice composition. Simple and efficient.
Good luck m8